Wednesday, 1 December 2010

Title Page :)

So i've played around with the photo and the title and this is what i've come up with for my title page.

PLEASE GIVE ME SOME FEEDBACK :)


changes will be made before it's complete, so please suggest any. :)
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3 comments:

  1. Caroline Birks1 December 2010 at 04:06

    I like it so far but yor model seems a bit lost behind all the text. Maybe you could try to add more colour to her by using GIMP eg her lip colour could be brighter to match some of the pinks on the page

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  2. Liam Gardner1 December 2010 at 04:07

    I really like the title and the way that it is made as it stands out,I also like the picture and the colour scheme of the magazine cover. Lastly, I really like the composition of the coverlines and the title.
    If you were going to improve it you could maybe add more images for the coverlines.

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  3. Caroline Birks3 December 2010 at 01:38

    Maybe the masthead could also be a bit bigger?

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